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pampam20
20 June 2010 @ 10:52 pm
 I'm the author of 

Title:  Mariposa
Rated: M

Genre: Romance/ Humor

Pairings: Hinata/Shino Tayuya/Hidan Kakashi/Sakura
Chapters: 9

Summery: An entomology professor falls in love with a stripper. A brute falls in love with a tomboy. There is love that can risk a life.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4817344/1/Mariposa

I
 have been stuck on my 10th chapter for months! Mainly because I don't know how to write sex or how I want them to start off. I'm currently rewriting it for the third time and its like I cant get through this certain tunnel.

So what is happening at the moment is that the male and female characters are in a naughty fight which involves ecstasy cake, handcuffs, satin and corsets and also a riding crop. they play a game of 'you answer my questions and if you lie you get punished'( the women is doing the punishing and the man is cuffed to the chair.) The women gets the dirty truth of betrayal but also a confession of love and is asked to fly away with the man.  

This is where I'm stuck: 

Tayuya was wordless; she searched and searched for something to say. Something argumentative or a dispute; something that says she hasn’t lost. But it wasn’t a contest and the victory she was looking for was the wrong one. The rattle of the chain that linked Hidan’s handcuffs together broke her train of thought. Whatever happens next was eating at her as she stared at the long lasting effect of that devilish chocolate cake.

 

Hidan had similar thoughts as he became greatly aware of the pulsing of his aching member. 

  
“‘Yuya… I’ve answered your questions…played your game. Take off these damn handcuffs.”



WHAT NOW!!!! I don't know how to initiate the sex or when she should respond, which will be yes.

Help :(

 

 





     

 
 
pampam20
16 August 2009 @ 02:27 pm

First OneShot!!

 

Title: Pretty Please

Rating: M

Genre: Romance/General

Characters: Zabuza/Hinata

Summery: It was cold that night; freezing but everything inside me burned for her. I’d drive the distance, trek the snow and even read a book just to see her--the cutest little librarian. Reviews would be nice critic or not.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5304458/1/Pretty_Please

 

 
 
 
pampam20
20 June 2009 @ 11:34 am
Finished chapter!

Title:  Mariposa

Rated: M

Genre: Romance/ Humor

Pairings: Hinata/Shino Tayuya/Hidan Kakashi/Sakura

Chapters: 8


Summery: An entomology professor falls in love with a stripper. A brute falls in love with a tomboy. Tell me what you think.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4817344/1/Mariposa

 
 
pampam20
12 May 2009 @ 08:50 pm

Ok! So imagine this! Two Naruto characters work at Mcdonalds on the late shift; open till midnight. One's in the back flippin burgers and frying french fries while the other's in the front patiently waiting for costumers. No one's come around since 9:30 pm while there's obvious sexual tension and strong want between the two. All alone the night is silent while a certain character is dreaming about being bent over the greeting counter by the certain character flippin burgers in the back as he gives him/her the service of a life time. 

Tell me people! Who are those characters???
 
 
 
pampam20
01 February 2009 @ 11:52 am

 


Hey! How are you? And I bet your answer is that your pretty darn dandy! Don't have many friends on here but hopefully that will change. I'm a Fanfic writting, fan art drawing, smut loving highschooler. Curently I feel fantastic this fine first day of February.

I want everyone to know that I'm writting a Shino/Hinata fanfic and if you want to read it go for it!

www.fanfiction.net/s/4817344/1/Mariposa

If you got here from Fanfiction.net that's great too! here a some questions.

Every stripper has His or her own complimentary song to dance to.

Male strippers in my story

- Hidan
-Deidara
-Lee
-Kabuto
-Sasori
-Tobi

What Song goes with what stripper?

Who thinks Tayuya and Hidan should have a one nightstand?